The Lucky Escape

Once upon a time, there were two little boys, Tyler and Derek. They were hunting pigs in bush in the valley. It was dark and spooky, with branches cracking and vines swirling because of the wind. They were looking through their binoculars and suddenly they saw a young boar with no tusks rooting for bugs and mushrooms.

They carefully sneaked through the bush. Suddenly Tyler snapped a branch and the boar looked up and saw us. The boar jogged off. We started chasing it. It ran into the middle of nowhere.

The boys stopped and stared at the creaking bridge while the pig ran over it. On the other side was a stone castle that was falling down. The pig ran across the slimy bridge and into old castle. Into the castle it went. The boys heard a scream in the creepy castle.  When Tyler and Derek walked in they heard a creak. The creak came from inside. Tyler  jumped back, looked up and  then heard another creak. They tip toed along and then split up. Derek walked up the stairs and there were four eyes and Derek jumped over. Tyler saw a hole in the floor and fell in. He screamed!

This is the story Derek told ...

I looked back. I  wondered where Tyler was.

“He must have taken a turn,” I thought. “No wait, that hole wasn’t there. Tyler must have fallen down. There must been a missing board.”

I heard a sream then it went quite.I turn my torch on and slowly climbed down through the hole. Below the hole was a big hallway. I walked down the hallway. It was scary because spiders crawled on the wall and it was smokey meaning you could not see well. The hallway kept on going and going. I felt  along the wall and looked up. It was dark and smokey behind me. But there was a wall behind me. It was slimy like a frog or a snail had moved all over it.

I heard a squeal down the hallway. It felt like a pig squealing. Then I heard Tyler scream, “HELP!”

I sprint down the hallway, listening to where the scream came from.  When I heard it again it was around the corner.

Suddenly I thought I had my torch with me... but I must have dropped it while I was coming down the hallway.  Without a  torch I couldn’t see well so I was running along touching the wall.

Suddenly I spotted a pig tied up.  I thought Tyler had done it but then I realised that we hadn’t carried rope!

As I looked further down the hall I saw a witch trying to tie Tyler up. I grabbed a stick, sprinted to Tyler and pushed her away. Then I saw a knife. Tyler was half tied up.

“I’d better grab the knife and cut him loose!”

I freed him and we made a run for the door.  We got outside and saw the road.  We ran toward the road.

In the distance we heard a car.  We sprinted toward the road.  We watched the car turn into a driveway. We followed the car into the driveway to get a phone to ring home.

By Derek

The Lucky Escape

Once upon a time, there were two little boys, Tyler and Derek. They were hunting pigs in bush in the valley. It was dark and spooky, with branches cracking and vines swirling because of the wind. They were looking through their binoculars and suddenly they saw a young boar with no tusks rooting for bugs and mushrooms.

They carefully sneaked through the bush. Suddenly Tyler snapped a branch and the boar looked up and saw us. The boar jogged off. We started chasing it. It ran into the middle of nowhere.

The boys stopped and stared at the creaking bridge while the pig ran over it. On the other side was a stone castle that was falling down. The pig ran across the slimy bridge and into old castle. Into the castle it went. The boys heard a scream in the creepy castle.  When Tyler and Derek walked in they heard a creak. The creak came from inside. Tyler  jumped back, looked up and  then heard another creak. They tip toed along and then split up. Derek walked up the stairs and there were four eyes and Derek jumped over. Tyler saw a hole in the floor and fell in. He screamed!

This is the story Derek told ...

I looked back. I  wondered where Tyler was.

“He must have taken a turn,” I thought. “No wait, that hole wasn’t there. Tyler must have fallen down. There must been a missing board.”

I heard a sream then it went quite.I turn my torch on and slowly climbed down through the hole. Below the hole was a big hallway. I walked down the hallway. It was scary because spiders crawled on the wall and it was smokey meaning you could not see well. The hallway kept on going and going. I felt  along the wall and looked up. It was dark and smokey behind me. But there was a wall behind me. It was slimy like a frog or a snail had moved all over it.

I heard a squeal down the hallway. It felt like a pig squealing. Then I heard Tyler scream, “HELP!”

I sprint down the hallway, listening to where the scream came from.  When I heard it again it was around the corner.

Suddenly I thought I had my torch with me... but I must have dropped it while I was coming down the hallway.  Without a  torch I couldn’t see well so I was running along touching the wall.

Suddenly I spotted a pig tied up.  I thought Tyler had done it but then I realised that we hadn’t carried rope!

As I looked further down the hall I saw a witch trying to tie Tyler up. I grabbed a stick, sprinted to Tyler and pushed her away. Then I saw a knife. Tyler was half tied up.

“I’d better grab the knife and cut him loose!”

I freed him and we made a run for the door.  We got outside and saw the road.  We ran toward the road.

In the distance we heard a car.  We sprinted toward the road.  We watched the car turn into a driveway. We followed the car into the driveway to get a phone to ring home.

By Derek

The Lucky Escape

Once upon a time, there were two little boys, Tyler and Derek. They were hunting pigs in bush in the valley. It was dark and spooky, with branches cracking and vines swirling because of the wind. They were looking through their binoculars and suddenly they saw a young boar with no tusks rooting for bugs and mushrooms.

They carefully sneaked through the bush. Suddenly Tyler snapped a branch and the boar looked up and saw us. The boar jogged off. We started chasing it. It ran into the middle of nowhere.

The boys stopped and stared at the creaking bridge while the pig ran over it. On the other side was a stone castle that was falling down. The pig ran across the slimy bridge and into old castle. Into the castle it went. The boys heard a scream in the creepy castle.  When Tyler and Derek walked in they heard a creak. The creak came from inside. Tyler  jumped back, looked up and  then heard another creak. They tip toed along and then split up. Derek walked up the stairs and there were four eyes and Derek jumped over. Tyler saw a hole in the floor and fell in. He screamed!

This is the story Derek told ...

I looked back. I  wondered where Tyler was.

“He must have taken a turn,” I thought. “No wait, that hole wasn’t there. Tyler must have fallen down. There must been a missing board.”

I heard a sream then it went quite.I turn my torch on and slowly climbed down through the hole. Below the hole was a big hallway. I walked down the hallway. It was scary because spiders crawled on the wall and it was smokey meaning you could not see well. The hallway kept on going and going. I felt  along the wall and looked up. It was dark and smokey behind me. But there was a wall behind me. It was slimy like a frog or a snail had moved all over it.

I heard a squeal down the hallway. It felt like a pig squealing. Then I heard Tyler scream, “HELP!”

I sprint down the hallway, listening to where the scream came from.  When I heard it again it was around the corner.

Suddenly I thought I had my torch with me... but I must have dropped it while I was coming down the hallway.  Without a  torch I couldn’t see well so I was running along touching the wall.

Suddenly I spotted a pig tied up.  I thought Tyler had done it but then I realised that we hadn’t carried rope!

As I looked further down the hall I saw a witch trying to tie Tyler up. I grabbed a stick, sprinted to Tyler and pushed her away. Then I saw a knife. Tyler was half tied up.

“I’d better grab the knife and cut him loose!”

I freed him and we made a run for the door.  We got outside and saw the road.  We ran toward the road.

In the distance we heard a car.  We sprinted toward the road.  We watched the car turn into a driveway. We followed the car into the driveway to get a phone to ring home.

By Derek

The Lucky Escape

Once upon a time, there were two little boys, Tyler and Derek. They were hunting pigs in bush in the valley. It was dark and spooky, with branches cracking and vines swirling because of the wind. They were looking through their binoculars and suddenly they saw a young boar with no tusks rooting for bugs and mushrooms.

They carefully sneaked through the bush. Suddenly Tyler snapped a branch and the boar looked up and saw us. The boar jogged off. We started chasing it. It ran into the middle of nowhere.

The boys stopped and stared at the creaking bridge while the pig ran over it. On the other side was a stone castle that was falling down. The pig ran across the slimy bridge and into old castle. Into the castle it went. The boys heard a scream in the creepy castle.  When Tyler and Derek walked in they heard a creak. The creak came from inside. Tyler  jumped back, looked up and  then heard another creak. They tip toed along and then split up. Derek walked up the stairs and there were four eyes and Derek jumped over. Tyler saw a hole in the floor and fell in. He screamed!

This is the story Derek told ...

I looked back. I  wondered where Tyler was.

“He must have taken a turn,” I thought. “No wait, that hole wasn’t there. Tyler must have fallen down. There must been a missing board.”

I heard a sream then it went quite.I turn my torch on and slowly climbed down through the hole. Below the hole was a big hallway. I walked down the hallway. It was scary because spiders crawled on the wall and it was smokey meaning you could not see well. The hallway kept on going and going. I felt  along the wall and looked up. It was dark and smokey behind me. But there was a wall behind me. It was slimy like a frog or a snail had moved all over it.

I heard a squeal down the hallway. It felt like a pig squealing. Then I heard Tyler scream, “HELP!”

I sprint down the hallway, listening to where the scream came from.  When I heard it again it was around the corner.

Suddenly I thought I had my torch with me... but I must have dropped it while I was coming down the hallway.  Without a  torch I couldn’t see well so I was running along touching the wall.

Suddenly I spotted a pig tied up.  I thought Tyler had done it but then I realised that we hadn’t carried rope!

As I looked further down the hall I saw a witch trying to tie Tyler up. I grabbed a stick, sprinted to Tyler and pushed her away. Then I saw a knife. Tyler was half tied up.

“I’d better grab the knife and cut him loose!”

I freed him and we made a run for the door.  We got outside and saw the road.  We ran toward the road.

In the distance we heard a car.  We sprinted toward the road.  We watched the car turn into a driveway. We followed the car into the driveway to get a phone to ring home.

By Derek

The Lucky Escape

Once upon a time, there were two little boys, Tyler and Derek. They were hunting pigs in bush in the valley. It was dark and spooky, with branches cracking and vines swirling because of the wind. They were looking through their binoculars and suddenly they saw a young boar with no tusks rooting for bugs and mushrooms.

They carefully sneaked through the bush. Suddenly Tyler snapped a branch and the boar looked up and saw us. The boar jogged off. We started chasing it. It ran into the middle of nowhere.

The boys stopped and stared at the creaking bridge while the pig ran over it. On the other side was a stone castle that was falling down. The pig ran across the slimy bridge and into old castle. Into the castle it went. The boys heard a scream in the creepy castle.  When Tyler and Derek walked in they heard a creak. The creak came from inside. Tyler  jumped back, looked up and  then heard another creak. They tip toed along and then split up. Derek walked up the stairs and there were four eyes and Derek jumped over. Tyler saw a hole in the floor and fell in. He screamed!

This is the story Derek told ...

I looked back. I  wondered where Tyler was.

“He must have taken a turn,” I thought. “No wait, that hole wasn’t there. Tyler must have fallen down. There must been a missing board.”

I heard a sream then it went quite.I turn my torch on and slowly climbed down through the hole. Below the hole was a big hallway. I walked down the hallway. It was scary because spiders crawled on the wall and it was smokey meaning you could not see well. The hallway kept on going and going. I felt  along the wall and looked up. It was dark and smokey behind me. But there was a wall behind me. It was slimy like a frog or a snail had moved all over it.

I heard a squeal down the hallway. It felt like a pig squealing. Then I heard Tyler scream, “HELP!”

I sprint down the hallway, listening to where the scream came from.  When I heard it again it was around the corner.

Suddenly I thought I had my torch with me... but I must have dropped it while I was coming down the hallway.  Without a  torch I couldn’t see well so I was running along touching the wall.

Suddenly I spotted a pig tied up.  I thought Tyler had done it but then I realised that we hadn’t carried rope!

As I looked further down the hall I saw a witch trying to tie Tyler up. I grabbed a stick, sprinted to Tyler and pushed her away. Then I saw a knife. Tyler was half tied up.

“I’d better grab the knife and cut him loose!”

I freed him and we made a run for the door.  We got outside and saw the road.  We ran toward the road.

In the distance we heard a car.  We sprinted toward the road.  We watched the car turn into a driveway. We followed the car into the driveway to get a phone to ring home.

By Derek

The Lucky Escape

Once upon a time, there were two little boys, Tyler and Derek. They were hunting pigs in bush in the valley. It was dark and spooky, with branches cracking and vines swirling because of the wind. They were looking through their binoculars and suddenly they saw a young boar with no tusks rooting for bugs and mushrooms.

They carefully sneaked through the bush. Suddenly Tyler snapped a branch and the boar looked up and saw us. The boar jogged off. We started chasing it. It ran into the middle of nowhere.

The boys stopped and stared at the creaking bridge while the pig ran over it. On the other side was a stone castle that was falling down. The pig ran across the slimy bridge and into old castle. Into the castle it went. The boys heard a scream in the creepy castle.  When Tyler and Derek walked in they heard a creak. The creak came from inside. Tyler  jumped back, looked up and  then heard another creak. They tip toed along and then split up. Derek walked up the stairs and there were four eyes and Derek jumped over. Tyler saw a hole in the floor and fell in. He screamed!

This is the story Derek told ...

I looked back. I  wondered where Tyler was.

“He must have taken a turn,” I thought. “No wait, that hole wasn’t there. Tyler must have fallen down. There must been a missing board.”

I heard a sream then it went quite.I turn my torch on and slowly climbed down through the hole. Below the hole was a big hallway. I walked down the hallway. It was scary because spiders crawled on the wall and it was smokey meaning you could not see well. The hallway kept on going and going. I felt  along the wall and looked up. It was dark and smokey behind me. But there was a wall behind me. It was slimy like a frog or a snail had moved all over it.

I heard a squeal down the hallway. It felt like a pig squealing. Then I heard Tyler scream, “HELP!”

I sprint down the hallway, listening to where the scream came from.  When I heard it again it was around the corner.

Suddenly I thought I had my torch with me... but I must have dropped it while I was coming down the hallway.  Without a  torch I couldn’t see well so I was running along touching the wall.

Suddenly I spotted a pig tied up.  I thought Tyler had done it but then I realised that we hadn’t carried rope!

As I looked further down the hall I saw a witch trying to tie Tyler up. I grabbed a stick, sprinted to Tyler and pushed her away. Then I saw a knife. Tyler was half tied up.

“I’d better grab the knife and cut him loose!”

I freed him and we made a run for the door.  We got outside and saw the road.  We ran toward the road.

In the distance we heard a car.  We sprinted toward the road.  We watched the car turn into a driveway. We followed the car into the driveway to get a phone to ring home.

By Derek

The Lucky Escape

Once upon a time, there were two little boys, Tyler and Derek. They were hunting pigs in bush in the valley. It was dark and spooky, with branches cracking and vines swirling because of the wind. They were looking through their binoculars and suddenly they saw a young boar with no tusks rooting for bugs and mushrooms.

They carefully sneaked through the bush. Suddenly Tyler snapped a branch and the boar looked up and saw us. The boar jogged off. We started chasing it. It ran into the middle of nowhere.

The boys stopped and stared at the creaking bridge while the pig ran over it. On the other side was a stone castle that was falling down. The pig ran across the slimy bridge and into old castle. Into the castle it went. The boys heard a scream in the creepy castle.  When Tyler and Derek walked in they heard a creak. The creak came from inside. Tyler  jumped back, looked up and  then heard another creak. They tip toed along and then split up. Derek walked up the stairs and there were four eyes and Derek jumped over. Tyler saw a hole in the floor and fell in. He screamed!

This is the story Derek told ...

I looked back. I  wondered where Tyler was.

“He must have taken a turn,” I thought. “No wait, that hole wasn’t there. Tyler must have fallen down. There must been a missing board.”

I heard a sream then it went quite.I turn my torch on and slowly climbed down through the hole. Below the hole was a big hallway. I walked down the hallway. It was scary because spiders crawled on the wall and it was smokey meaning you could not see well. The hallway kept on going and going. I felt  along the wall and looked up. It was dark and smokey behind me. But there was a wall behind me. It was slimy like a frog or a snail had moved all over it.

I heard a squeal down the hallway. It felt like a pig squealing. Then I heard Tyler scream, “HELP!”

I sprint down the hallway, listening to where the scream came from.  When I heard it again it was around the corner.

Suddenly I thought I had my torch with me... but I must have dropped it while I was coming down the hallway.  Without a  torch I couldn’t see well so I was running along touching the wall.

Suddenly I spotted a pig tied up.  I thought Tyler had done it but then I realised that we hadn’t carried rope!

As I looked further down the hall I saw a witch trying to tie Tyler up. I grabbed a stick, sprinted to Tyler and pushed her away. Then I saw a knife. Tyler was half tied up.

“I’d better grab the knife and cut him loose!”

I freed him and we made a run for the door.  We got outside and saw the road.  We ran toward the road.

In the distance we heard a car.  We sprinted toward the road.  We watched the car turn into a driveway. We followed the car into the driveway to get a phone to ring home.

By Derek